Prompt: After reviewing the feedback on your argument essay, identify one thing you did well and one area you need to improve. Explain what you will do differently the next time you write an AP Lang argument essay.

 Prompt Response: One thing I did well on was my evidence about personal experience. One thing I did not so good on was my satisfaction point. I didn't talk enough about the not good side effect of selfies. and I just didn't give enough about it. Overall I got a 4/6 so thats not that bad.  That's the feedback I got on my essay.

Summary: we started writing a poem.

Reflection: I learned how to use this app to make my poem come to life.

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